Audience Feedback on first cut

Since posting my first cut of my film I have received audience feedback from two members of my target audience on what parts they like and what parts I could improve on before I make my final cut. I made a short questionnaire to get this data:

From this I have been assured that I need to add either annotation, narration, or both to make my film more interesting beside the clips shown. After researching into Amelie I know what style of narration I would use, and from my textual analysis on a short film I have seen how to make narration fit films suitably. Now I can continue making my film by practicing annotation.